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Yui & Thanatos take the day off to go fishing.
The ocean. THE OCEAN. I can't do it. It was a nightmare. Took me ages to think how to do an ocean. How do you people do your oceans?! I can't, I just can't. It looks so wrong. Any tips, pleeeeeeeezzzzz. Song : Fisherman's Horizon - FFVIII OST Characters : Yui & Thanatos copyright Me. NO STEALING. psst...wanna commission me? |
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hmm.. u should make the water more wild
not like the straight lines u did in the water
but the color use in the water is very well
try making waves by bobling some of those straight lines and using white/very light blue to make the foam on those waves x3
a bit hard to explain tho'
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About the ocean...First, I agree with Eadwine...and then..maybe You overdid a bit with the twinkle stars (sorry I dunno how to call it
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Glad to see you''re submitting again ^^ (it's been quiet for a while, right? Or is my Inbox malfunctioning again?)
AS for the water, you might want to make it more wild, it looks a bit straight. Still, this looks great!
Love how the umbrella shares some of the shade on the girl. ^^
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the ocean, correct me if i'm wrong, but did you use a pattern gradient for it? there's nothing wrong with using that, but the water looks rather flat and doesn't have any depth, except for the ripples by the pillars and fishing line. um, i don't usually do water as well, but when i do i try to paint it in, that way it fits with the overall image. and like what the others mentioned, try not to use straight lines for the waves. if it helps, use picture references ^_^
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Great. For the water, you could add some more highlights and shadows to make it seem wavier... like, kind of squigly... thick... yeah. Umm, hard to explain. You could always look at references.
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